That was the holidays

Have you ever smelled the school holidays?
Sure you have.  

Remember that time you went swimming in the swimming pool?
The water was so freezing cold that you couldn't get out and into the warm spa pool.
Warm water bubbling ,feeling nice and relaxed.
That was the holidays.

Have you ever smelled the school holidays?
Sure you have.
Remember that time you ate ice cream at the park?
The frozen ice cream was dripping sticky cream all over the ground.
Having fun with you mum and dad.
That was the holidays.


Have you ever smell the school holidays?
Sure you have.
Remember that time you went with your mum and dad,cooking BBQ at the park?
BBQ food is delicious and golden brown.
Your stomuch rumbled you coudn't wait to eat!
That was holidays.

My Reflection 

I have been learning to write a poem using descriptive language.
We used the poem "That was Summer" by Marci Ridlon as inspiration.
I found this tricky because it takes a long time to write the poem.If you writing a poem using desriptive language you need use 5 senses which is see, smell, hear, touch and taste
My next step is to write more interesting.